The Invisible Library

Old Dogs and All That

I�ve made a few revisions on the Black Doll. Nothing major (yet). Just a few grammar and spelling errors that I missed the first time around.

I�m still pondering the fate of this story. Should I put up on blocks in the yard for some extensive reworking or just leave it as is? If I rewrite it, what needs work? I�d like to maybe expand Vivian Thelema�s character a bit, perhaps connect her more directly to the Knights Templar, possibly in a historical context with the Doll, which would require showing more of the Doll�s history. That could be fun. Also, I�m thinking of getting a little more into Uncle Rudolph�s dubious past, make his unacceptable predilections a lot stronger (and thus, creepier).

Any thoughts?

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