I’ve added chapter 2 and a slightly revised chapter 1.
I tend to revise as I go, which I know I shouldn’t but do anyway. It’s the obsessive librarian tendencies creeping in.
Anyway, Simon’s world is getting stranger, which I like. The fun part is not knowing just where I’m going with this story. I have a vague half formed idea but it’s like driving through the fog: I can see a few feet in front of me but any further than that is hazy and indistinct. But it’s exciting too, because nay moment, I may hit a tree! Er. Or, just find something unexpected.
Hi, I get 404 error messages when I click on the PDF links to Chapters 1 and 2.
Weird. I’ll fix that…
All fixed. Yu have to hold control and click or right click if you use one of those silly old PC mouses. Meeses. Mice.